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* '''parallel comparatives''' | |||
* when making a comparison, we must compare similar, or parallel, things | |||
** thus the grammar of comparisons must also be parallel | |||
** the SAT Writing measures student ability to maintain parallel comparisons | |||
* ex.: | |||
** "The students who studied hard performed better on the test than those who didn't study" | |||
*** maintains the parallel" "students who studied hard" with "those [students] who didn't study" | |||
* or | |||
** "Looking at the results, it is clear that the students who did study hard performed better on the test than did students who did not study hard." | |||
*** maintains the parallel "students who did study hard" with "the students who did not study hard" | |||
click EXPAND for an example from CB practice test 10: | |||
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She found that students who were required to volunteer rushed to complete their service hours in early high [19] school; they then did significantly less regular volunteer work in the twelfth grade [20] [than the service hours of those] not required to volunteer. | |||
A) than the service hours of those [NO CHANGE] | |||
B) than did students who were | |||
C) than hours worked by students | |||
D) compared with students | |||
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* ''' B) "than did students who were not required" parallels to "students who were required"''' | |||
** note that question 19 correct answer "D) sets up correct reading of question no. 20 | |||
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