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*** does the new sentence focus on the main idea? | *** does the new sentence focus on the main idea? | ||
*** avoid passive voice & subject -verb inversion (placing the subject after the verb) | *** avoid passive voice & subject -verb inversion (placing the subject after the verb) | ||
** grammar and punctuation errors | ** direct v. passive voice | ||
** emphasis on the main clause ("emphasis shift") | |||
** grammar and punctuation errors, especially regarding punctuation between clauses and phrases | |||
== "Command of Evidence” questions: adding or deleting text == | == "Command of Evidence” questions: adding or deleting text == |